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She's the girl who always smiled
And never seemed to have a care
But not a soul would ever know
Behind the scenes what happened there
The girl who always laughed and joked
Was the girl who cried to sleep
The girl who always seemed so lively
Was the girl who had sank much too deep
Her grins were mearly masks she wore
To cover up the tightened frown
The things she said were all illusions
To make it seem she wasn't down
And no one would have ever guessed
What she was really feeling
And when they did, it was too late
For she was hanging from the ceiling.
©2008-2009 *ZabuKawaii
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Author's Comments

So yeah, Kicking off this no-fanart mode with some terrible poetry! Aint life the grandest.

Thank you :iconuchihaprincess16: for the idea

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:iconamberlee07:
wow :O im the first to comment. i loved it!t was so sad *snif* i like your poetry though. much better then mine
:iconsasquatchmcr3:
Fucking awesome! Sorry. I love writing and poems are so much cooler when they rhyme/have a tempo that sounds great.
And its funny, cause a lot of people understand what you are saying without going to deep, yet it is deep. And I think everyone can relate to "that girl."

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:iconxxxkaoruloverxxx:
this is amazing i love your poetry!!you should wright more!!

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"There seems to be a constant decay of all our Ideas, even of those which are struck deepest." ~John Locke
:iconblondybabez13:
*rubs neck* ho shit o_O

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:icongrassyswing:
wow poor girl

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